▶ Your Answer :
According to
the reading, there are three kinds of advantages on green roofs. However, the
lecturer gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the ideas of reading.
At first, the
lecturer insists that the park on the roofs is problematic. One of the most
important things for a park is accessibility. However, the park on the building
is difficult to reach. This argument rebuffs the reading's idea that the living
roofs can be a solution to the lack of park.
Secondly, the
speaker argues that the green roofs can not give a citizen a great view. The
location of green roofs is far from our sights. Thus, a walker on the sidewalk
cannot does not enjoy the view of green roofs. This statement challenges the reading's
idea that the green roofs enhance the aesthetics of cities.
Finally, the
lecturer asserts that the plants on the roofs cannot bring economic benefits
because of the additional cost. The cost of the constructing the green roofs is
expensive. Moreover, the maintenance of the roofs garden is also expensive.
This argument directly rebuts the reading's idea that green roofs can bring
saving energy cost by green roofs.
Good (24–30)
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can not-->cannot 두번째 본문 세번째 문장에서, 문맥상 does not 보다 cannot이 어울립니다. 걷는 사람의 의지대로 즐기지 않기보다는 즐길 수 없는 상황을 더 강조하기 위해선 cannot이 더 어울립니다.
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