▶ Your Answer :
As a commercial
competition get severe, some television advertising, which directed toward young children has appeared. I believe this current money-oriented situation
would be harmful on the young children and our society. The following two examples can be the valid evidence of my standpoint. First, an age of under five is very important biologically.
Second, this is too commercial because young
children cannot think properly.
From a biological
point of view, the age of under five is critical for children in many aspects
such as personality, habits and so on. Moreover, it is very well-known that habits from young
ages are very difficult to change. Hence, these age
is crucial for their life. Therefore, it should be banned to advertise direct
toward these ages because children in these ages
are so sensitive that thorough protection
by their family is needed.
Commonly, a human
can think properly after they are mentally matured. Thus, publicizing toward
young children before mental maturation is problematic. Although free trade system
is prevalent over the world, These special cases require national regulation.
Otherwise, the world would be too competitive and become difficult to find happiness.
To sum up, the protection of children under five
is essential because this age is a biologically important
period. Second, the too commercial
advertisement should be banned because it
would bring adverse effects on our society.
In this regard, we should not allow advertising
toward children under the age of five. |