▶ Your Answer :
In the lecture, the speaker maintains that the
theories suggested in the reading are groundless. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s point that
there are practical theories to explain contributing factors of global warming.
To begin with, the lecturer asserts that landfills is
not a key factor of the rise in global temperatures. This is because methane accounts for less than 9 % of greenhouse made by human. In addition, it make up less
than 1% of the atmosphere. (What does it mean?) It is impossible to explain that landfills is a significant
contributor to global warming. (State the reading's opinion)
On top of that, she argues that cause of global
warming cannot be caused by is not deforestation. The main reason of this argument is that when trees naturally die and
decay, carbon dioxide reenters the atmosphere. On the other hand, the harvesting
by human delays the process because it keep carbon dioxide into stuff like
furniture. (Why do you mention harvesting here?) This contradicts the reading’s point that deforestation
is cause of global warming.
Finally, the speaker contends that the warming trend is
not related to the cycle of climate change. This is because temperatures in the Medieval
Warm Period varied greatly depending on locations. (Mention evidence) This refutes the reading passage’s claim that natural
cycle of global temperatures cause the warming trend.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Score | Limited 7-10 | - 이야기가 매끄럽게 진행되지 않고 있어요.
- 첫 번째 단락은 reading의 입장을 서술해주셔야 합니다. - 단순히 listening의 단어들만을 나열하는 것이 아닌, 적절한 설명과 근거를 제시해주셔야 합니다.
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