▶ Topic :
5.
The reading passage provides several evidences that
online pharmacy has huge drawbacks which make it inadequate to people who use.
However, the professor in the lecture refutes the author’s claim and points out
the positive potentials and advantages of it.
First of all, the professor mentions that the online
pharmacy would enable people to seek a new medicine which has not been released
yet. He rebuts the reading passage’s argument about illegal and unapproved
drugs by asserting that such regulations regarding to this issues are not a
jurisdiction of the government. The lecturer believes the new form of store
eventually benefits customers by broadening the options that people could
make. This refutes the author’s idea that online pharmacy would distribute
untested dangerous drugs.
Second, the lecturer argues that online pharmacy could
also be able to articulate possible dangers and warning of a medicine.
Furthermore, it (what is?) is actually more profound since it includes various
sources of materials while traditional pharmacy only allowed to meet one doctor. The website could provide question and answer forms of information from diverse
sources. This counters the author’s assertion that the lack of interaction may
cause serious health-related damages for the users.
Lastly, according to the professor, the price of the
medicine is significantly cheap compared to the previous form of drug store; the new form is much cheaper since it is imported from overseas. People could afford the
price for the medicine that they crucially need. Therefore, the new form
of distribution would save lives of a lot of people. The casts doubt on the
reading passage’s saying that the overseas manufacturing of the drug has
potential threats, including overusing.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD | FAIR
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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