▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that the function of deer's antler is determined. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's points by saying that the antler can be used in other areas. First, the professor contends that the antler does not only exist to attract mates. To explain, deers had various use of use different methods such as vocalization and body postures to attract females. Furthermore, in deer's world, the male deer's small antler is important point of mate. In other words, the antler was not for the mating. This casts doubt for the author's claim that the antler existed for the competition for mates. (밑줄친 small antler가 important point인 부분과 not for the mating 사이의 연결에 있어 추가 information이 없는 것 같습니다. 보충해주세요) Next, the professor insists that the antler was not used for marking territory that they control. In fact, deers mark make sure of their territory by using their scents, not their antlers. They use their special secretion, which is easily detected by other males. In addition, they rub their antlers to get rid of their soft outer skin. This counters the author's assertion that deer's antler was rubbed for marking their territory.
Finally, the professor argues that the antler was not used to defend the deer. This is because the antler was shed in winter when deers become weaker, and these deers? antlers? they는 불분명하니 주어를 명확하게 작성해주세요 need more protection. Plus, deers were grown by females, not by males. The female deers do not have antlers. This means that the antlers of male deers do not need to protect their offsprings. This refutes the author's suggestion that the antlers were used to defend them from their predators such as wolves.
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- 정확히 reading 과 lecturer가 대조되는 점을 밝힌 뒤 어떻게 두 side가 입장 차이를 보이는 지 작성해주세요. - don't --> do not 등 full version작성해주세요 - 기타 문법 실수 및 오타 실수 주의해주세요.
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