▶ Your Answer : Whether utilizing money for house or business is a prevalent topic undergoing debate among many people. Lots of opinions and suggestions exist with regard to the topic. After reviewing the opinions from several perspectives, I personally agree to the idea that investing money on business is even better than on house for the following three reasons. To begin with, the lecture I have heard in the past become a good reference to select my own option about the topic. When I was a second grade in middle school, a lecturer visited my school and told us about business. He teaches us how important business is to earn and increase financial sources. And he also teaches lots of methods to succeed in business through his own experience. Influenced by the lecture, I can strongly assert that investing money on business is much more advantageous than on house. Secondly, some views of experts give me an inspiration to make my own determination in regard to the topic. According to the survey conducted by some experts working at Seoul National University in Korea, More than sixty percents of population in Korea have recently tried to challenge on business and the percentage continue to rise up to now. This is because many pre-examples of winners who became the rich through trying on business have affected them. With the consequence of the survey, I think using money for business is definitely greater. Lastly, a philosophical proverb also helps me decide my own choice about the topic. The philosophical saying, helpful for learning realistic wisdom appropriately applied to the topic of today, is "Challenge can make new opportunities". I think the proverb can be interpreted as "challenges of business can make financial opportunities to make a lot of money". Therefore economical trial with business can create much more emotional improvement and financial development in our life than with house. In conclusion, I agree to the idea that utilizing money for business is even better than for house for some reasons mentioned above. Thus I recommend for young generation to bravely invest their money on business. provided it succeeds, it will be good for you. If it fails, you can get good experience not to fail again. |