▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that It is not acceptable to infringe upon peopler's
freedom. However, in my opinion, I agree with the statement that it is sometimes
acceptable to infringe upon people's freedom. There are two reasons. First
freedom sometimes can be a poison to people. Second, It can also be a good
experience.
To begin with, "Freedom" It sounds like positive meaning but actually it is not.
Especially people who can not care or control themselves in the significant
situation. For example, a friend of mine who is very positive and optimistic had a
really important exam, so she had to study hard but she didn’t think getting a stress
was good for studying therefore she just studied moderately. Even though she did
not study a lot whenever her friends called her she just hanged out with her
friends. How was her score? Right she spoiled the exam. That is why freedom is
can be a poison.
On top of that, It can also be a good experience. This is surely as important as actual experience. I believe direct experience is one of the most essential factor of
success in this world. Imagine people only have textbook knowledge. Their view
will be so narrow.By getting an infringement of freedom, they can not only gain
diverse experience but also broaden their horizon of world. For example, a study
conducted by a group of psychology majors to determine whether an infringement
of freedom affect people's life. There were two groups monitored. The first group
was formed of business men who were infringed by their companies and the other
group did not get any control. After about 2 years, the researchers compared the
outcomes and recorded that the former group was able to meet what customers
and their companies need better than the latter group. The reason was that latter group did not think about others. They only had their own ideas, that’s why they
could not realize what customers really need and their companies’ goal.
To sum up, freedom is no always good thing in our life and sometimes
Infringement can be a good experience as former group. In this regard, I firmly
believe that not all freedom is good.
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