▶ Your Answer :
When purchasing new products, some people
would get recommendations from their friends or read information written in magazines. However, I
think that the greatest impact that helps one's decision decide whether to buy a commodity is
the review from online communities.
To begin with, while using with less effort and
time, you could easily obtain an abundant amount of information. You could simply
look up on details of the good on the web within several mouse clicks. Only thing one should do is getting on the internet and
typing the product you want to know about on the search box. Then immediately
hundreds and thousands of reviews will pop up and you could just select the one
you wish to read. In contrast, getting recommendation from friends or reading
magazines will take more time to get the same amount of information you can get
when using the online. For instance, you will need to find a friend you
actually does who has used the product you are interested in. However one friend's
recommendation will not grant us supply sufficient information for you. Then you will
have to look for more people to get satisfactory reviews. The whole action will consume a lot of your time
and effort. This is the same for magazines.
On top of that, reading online reviews can
actually let you know the pros and cons of the product in diverse perspectives.
The reviews usually contain information are written from every by different individuals having by their own kind of
perspective. Actual reviews of using the product will be provided which will
help you in your decision making process. From this, you could get an
understanding of the merchandise of its advantage and disadvantages of the product. If you get
information using other methods, you could get a one-sided view of the
product. (Why's that?) Later purchasing a product, when you learn a flaw of the product that
you haven't read or heard, it would decrease the satisfaction of your purchase. (Bit awkward sentence) This will not be happened when you use the online, where you could get a look
of the different situations.
To sum up, when you use the online you
could easily get abundant information in a short time and obtain diverse
opinions. Therefore, in my opinion, reviews from online communities has the
greatest impact on peoples' choice.
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