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Some people think that nowadays, people are less satisfied and happy than people were before. They may think that people have more worries that make people feel stressful these days. However, I do not agree with the opinion above. This is because people can enjoy more activities and get a lot of information to use to success. First of all, people can enjoy a lot of activities today. Generally, people can be satisfied when they do activities that they like. Since there are more communities and clubs that provide people with a number of leisure activities nowadays, people can feel more satisfied. For instance, when my father was in my age, he wanted to learn how to play soccer. However, there was no institutes which had a soccer class and my father was disappointed. However, now, there are a lot of clubs that provide diverse courses and activities to people for free or at the reasonable price. Thus, my father often goes to the community center to participate in a soccer class. My father said that he feels happy when he plays soccer with others. Second, people can get a lot of information to use for their success. Generally, success is a important factor to make people feel more content. With the help of the Internet, people can get a lot of information easily in these day. They can find other people’s successful experiences form the Internet and use them in their own field. For instance, when my sister was in high school, she wanted to be a doctor but did not have any information about being a doctor. One day, her teacher suggested my sister to use several web sites to search for information. My sister could read many experiences of people who were already doctors. Thus, my sister could get practical information about being a doctor and It was very beneficial for her. Now, my sister works at a hospital as a doctor and she said that she is very satisfied with her job. To sum up, I believe that people are more happy and satisfied today than people were in the past. This is because people can enjoy more activities and get a lot of information to use for their success.
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