▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that specializing in one skill is more beneficial than learning many skills to succeed. They may think that having many skills does not have advantages. However, I do not agree with the opinion above. This is because when people have many skills, they can get more opportunities to earn money and be promoted easily. First of all, people can get financial opportunities more. Generally, people can earn money by using their skills in their work areas. If people have more skills than others do, they can get more opportunities to make money. For instance, my uncle works at a hospital as a doctor and it is his main way to earn money. However, he is also good at playing the piano and sometimes goes to a jazz bar to play the piano as a special guest, and it brings him extra money. He said there are a lot of chances for him to make money because he has more skills than others, and he feels a sense of achievement whenever he earns money by using his skills. Second, people can be promoted in their work field easily. Nowadays, more companies want people who have diverse skills to be at higher positions such as a supervisor or manager. Therefore, if people have more skills than others, they can be satisfied with the standards easily that their company demands. For example, when I worked in a bank, I studied English after working. One day, the bank wanted to employ a person who can speak English as a manager position. I applied to the position and after interview with the employer, I could get the job. I think that my ability to speak in English helped me a lot to be a manager. To sum up, I believe that learning many skills is better than specializing in one skill. This is because people can get more chances to earn money and can be promoted in their work place easily.
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