I think all university students
should not take basic science classes if they are not scheduling planning on going into the field of science by the
following reasons. (서론을 더 길게 써주세요. 어떤 주제가 있었고, 이 주제에 대해서 사람들이 어떻게 생각하고, 난 그 생각에 다음
이유들 때문에 찬성/반대한다, 라는 형태로 써주세요.)
First, if they university students
have to take some courses which are not related to their major, they could develop
their major’s knowledge less than students who are not taking courses that are
not related to their major. These days, most good companies prefer employees
who have their major’s profound knowledge to other employees who have their
major’s shallow knowledge. (major’s profound/shallow
knowledge보다 profound/shallow
knowledge of their major이 더 자연스러워요) For this, students who want to work in good companies should take more
courses that are relevant to their major. However, if they could not do like
this but take basic science courses, they could
have harm to have taking courses could be prevented
from taking courses which can develop their profound knowledge. Because,
while they have to have basic science course, their studying time which they
can study their major deeply can be deprived. By the article in the New York
Times newspaper, most universities have their students’ possibility to go to
the good companies lower due to magnify necessary basic courses even which are
not related to their major most universities lower
the chances of their students of going to good companies due to their forcing
them to take basic courses which are not related to their major. For
example, although one of my friends had very lots of basic
conceptions which are not relevant to his major, he and failed to enter the
company which is the best field of his major. However, although another
friend who had fewer conceptions than precedent my friend mentioned above could go to that company. This was because she had much more deep a much deeper major knowledge than the earlier friend. (문단이 너무 깁니다. 같은 말을 반복하지 말고 불필요한 문장들은
지워주세요.)
Second, if they have to take basic courses which
are not relevant to their major, they could not would
not be able to listen to the courses which they want to take. Most
universities put a limit on the number of courses students can take.
while students go to the university. During students, They are assigned to take up
necessary major or elective credit which they have to get. For this, they do
not have enough time to take the classes which they want to take. If the
university fixes the courses like basic science which is are not relevant to students’ major, they have to give
up the courses they want to take or have to pay more money to take them. By the
a survey in the Korea Herald newspaper, 80
percent of Koreans have ever been giving had an
experience of giving up the courses even though they wanted to take them, because
they have not enough money or time to take them as taking courses which
university let the students take them, even they are not relevant to their
major.
In conclusion, students have to have the
right to have a better future which means they
can go to the better companies and gain
freedom; that means students can should be able to take courses they want to
take and students’ better future which means they can go to the better
companies. Therefore, I think all university students should not take entry
science classes if they are not scheduling planning
on going into the field of science.