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Due to the aid of new technology, people come to be able to create diverse inventions by using the technology. In particular, young generations are prone to fully take advantage of the new technology when expressing their fresh ideas to other people. In this regards, I firmly believe that technology has made our children more creative than in the past on the grounds given below. First and foremost, technology enables our children to access a plenty of information helpful for developing creativity. It is obvious that the originality can be achieved through the imitations in the first place. In other words, unless enough information is given to the children, they cannot easily create something from the scratch. A lot of information can serve as hints for our children so that they can come up with new findings. For instance, the inventors carry out a prior art search in advance of the patent application to confirm whether their ideas are already exist. Information obtained from the technology also can be used for giving a hint to our children for the sake of maximizing their creativity. Secondly, technology can serve as a tool when our children are willing to specifically realize their creativity. Thanks to the advent of technology, our children have been able to make their concept to be more specific idea. For example, my cousin, who wishes to become an architect, has learned a 3D drawing program. By utilizing the 3D drawing program, he is able to design or modify a structure of a new building. Without such a help from the technology, he would not specifically implement his creative ideas. Some people might believe that technology has made our children less creative than in the past, since the technology ruined our children's creativity in various ways. However, if our children can easily access to the useful information that can function as a base to realize creativity, and properly use the technology as an assisting tool, I definitely believe that technology makes out children more creative than before.
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