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There are many teachers who are serious and
strict when they teach. However, I don’t think that it is effective for
students to be strict and serious teacher because it will make students to feel
stressful. So, I believe if the teachers are humorous and easygoing, they can
draw student’s attraction to have their lecture more interesting in , which can be much helpful for students' academic performance study.
First
of all, many students get stressed out from teachers who are strict. Teachers force
students to study even if they do not want to do such as during the break time.
It makes them more disobedient to before teachers. For instance, when I was in
elementary school, my teacher was quite stern when teaching children to teach. She always gave us pressure
to study all the time. One day, many students in the classroom did not focus on their
study because it was soon lunch time was nearly closed. However, a teacher said if we do
not concentrate, we would not have lunch. Because all students got angry from
teacher, they determined to tell the principal of school this situation. After
then, we could get out of that situation and the teacher had to have meeting
with the principal.
On
top of that, if students meet teacher who are humorous and easygoing, they can
build good relationship between students and teacher which stimulate student to
be more interesting in study. For instance, I hated to learn science because I
don’t have any interesting in that field until I met my science teacher in 9th
grade. I could have fun time when I was in his class because his speaking is he was really fun and humorous. Due to his method of education, it made me I could easily expend my knowledge
about science before I realized it. Although science was the poorest subject
for me, and now I can enjoy learning about this field. Moreover, when college
required me to choose major, I chose Science engineering for my major in college without hesitation.
To
wrap it up, if students are taught by teachers who are serious and strict, they
can receive a lot of stress from teachers. But, students who are taught by teachers who
are humorous and easygoing teachers can be more interested get interesting in study. In this regard, I
believe that teachers should have personalities such as be easygoing, sociable, and
humorous.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Score | Limited 15-17 | - students to be strict~는 학생이 serious 한 것입니다.
- lunch time 때문에 get things worse 해졌다는 점이 다소 not formal합니다. 또한 meeting with principal 다음에 결론이 매듭지어 있지 않습니다. - 내용 전개가 구성력있게 전개되지 않습니다.
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