▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage argues that the growth of human
population and associated increase in agriculture and pesticide will bring the decline of the bird population. However, the lecturer disagrees with the
idea regarding the author's opinion on the decrease of the number of birds and makes points against the author's claims.
--> 조금 더 구체적으로 lecturer 가 author의 어떤 부분에 대해 반대하는지 서술해주세요.
First, the lecturer argues that urban development makes the habitat of birds better and larger, so this provides good habitats for some bird
species. To be specific, unbar dwellers claim that some bird species'
populations have been increased. She takes increased population of hawks and
pigeons in urban areas as an example. This directly casts doubt on the first
point of the reading passage that the habitat for birds continue to disappear
because of the growth of human populations and settlements, which is the reason
for the decline of the population of birds. (GOOD)
Second, the lecturer contends that less amount of the land can be used for the increased agricultural activities, which is smaller than the size of areas the author claims, thanks to the new crops producing large yields in the same area. Therefore,
there is no need to destroy the area where birds live. This contradicts the author's
contention that increased human population results in a growth of agriculture,
bringing less areas for bird habitats and the decline of the
bird population.
Finally, the speaker asserts that newly developed pesticides
are much less toxic than the old pesticides. Also, the pest-resistant crops are
developed, so they are likely to require less pesticides for their growth. Furthermore, she
mentions that the pest-resistant crops do not harm bird at all. This effectively
challenges the author's assertion that there will be a continuous demand to use
harmful chemical pesticides that negatively affects food chain and reproduction
associated with bird population and results in the decline of bird
population accordingly.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR-GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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