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According to the reading passage, the author mentions that the franchise has many advantages, and it could be helpful for people who are ready to start a new business. However, the lecturer opposes to this statement by providing counter arguments to each points provided by the reading passage (lecturer가 반대하는 부분을 분명히 작성해주세요) contradicts the reading passage's claim. by making counter point. First, the lecturer contends that franchising companies force owners to buy products which the companies produce. Although owners can get the products at lower price in a market, the companies do not allow owners to buy the products through another way. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that most franchising companies provide liable suppliers, and it will protect owners from risks of losses. Second, the lecturer claims that the owners have to pay the company for advertising costs. The companies require the fee from owner, and it would be 6% of the total sales. Also, this advertisement is not for owner's business but for brand of the company. As a result, the owner just gets little benefit from the advertisement, despite the fact that they spend much money on it. Third, the lecturer points out that there is a better way to start new business instead of starting a franchise. People can get a whole business from a former owner. According to a research, it would be more successful than the franchise. This refutes the reading passage's claim that a franchise can prevent the owners from taking risks. Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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