▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that a university professor should take priority in research over education as their main role. However, I think that a professor should focus on how to teach students rather rather than what to do research for two subsequent reasons: students go to university to learn new things and research can be done by their students in the lab.
To begin with, students choose to study in university to learn their major deeply. University Universities have a responsibility to provide high quality of education to meet their needs them. It should be noted that not all students want to do research during their university life. Students who want to study more deeply in their major will go to graduate school. According to the research conducted by 64D, more than 90% of freshman in Columbia university responded that the reason why they chose to study more instead of work after high school was because they wanted to get a better job. This means that professor should focus on how to make students to be a good employer by education.
On top of that, research can be done by their (문단에 처음 등장하는 사항이 대명사로 작성되어서는 안 됩니다.) graduate students. In other words., they do not need to do research in person. Education can make students to do research. For example, when I was a freshman in freshmen, I got interested in getting to know about the electric circuit. My professor who taught that course was willing to teach us even after the class. Thanks to him, I decided to do research on MOSFET as a graduate student. If he had not care for the class, I would not have not get interested gained interest in those device.
To sum up, considering that the reason why students choose university and their fact that students who can conduct research instead of the professor, their major role should be education.
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