■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support to the author’s claim that fish cultivations have some serious disadvantages that must be considered. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor from the lecture contends that lice can be easily managed. The fish famers begun to use small fishes (that) eat sea lice. (무슨 뜻인가요? 중간에 that이 들어갔어야 하는 건가요?) They can be fish cleaner and can completely solve the lice problem. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that fish farms cause to spread of sea lice, being fatal to wild fish. Next, the professor from the lecture insists that it is not plausible that fish cultivating contributes to the overharvesting of marine creatures. Nowadays, the feed management system is more efficient as (연결어 필요합니다) farm fished eat food once a day. Also they usually get protein from farm oil and soy. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that fish farming makes (주어 동사 불일치) the population of ocean life decline, since farm fish need protein from captive fishes. Finally, the professor from the lecture argues that there is a (관사 필요) way to avoid escaping fishes from fish farms. Ground farming places, such as tank, do not allow fishes to escape and to go to the natural environment. It is safely cultivation method without any harm to nature. This refutes the reading passage’s suggestion that captivate fish can escape and it will be disaster, driving down the number of local fish.
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