▶ Your Answer : It is debatable whether the Internet is as important as other service. This is an intriguing question because opinion concerning this issue can be different depending on people’s perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support that the Internet is as important as other service, therefore governments should make Internet access to all the citizens at no cost.
First of all, the internet is a very important method to find knowledge. To be specific, nowadays, various people such as scientist, biologist and cook share their knowledge on line so that the internet is a (관사) really good way to look for the things that I want to know. As today’s world is increasingly becoming fast-paced world (미완성 문장입니다) Modern society requires (주어 동사 불일치) a person who can search a lot of accurate knowledge as soon as possible. To illustrate, Steve Jobs, who is the founder of Apple, made great accomplishments in his life time. I read online that he was very successful because he had aptitude for finding a variety of information and adapting it on his work.
Second, making Internet access relieves stress because it helps to forget about the stressful aspects of people’s dailey lives. To be specific, according to the developments of video machines and technology, a lot of people have started to make new habit for relieving stress through watching television or Youtube. Stress is the main cause of dissatisfying lives and disease. Therefore people in modern society shoud find active ways to reduce stress and stay healthy in order to lead them to sucessful and satisfying lives. People can do this by using the internet material such as smart phone or television. For example, when I was in high school, I used to watch Nexflix. It is really helpful to reduce my stress level because it makes (주어 동사 불일치)me forget about my stressful assignments and writing tests.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that governments should make Internet access to all the citizens at no cost for (in order to 는 뒤에 동사원형이 나옵니다. 명사가 나올 땐 for을 써주시면 됩니다) their happy lives. All things considered, It is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
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