▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that deers have antlers that have functions to work to their advantages. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that Antlers is not major role in interacting with their partners. There are many other type of method to attract counterparts such as voice and posture. Moreover, It seems that having a large antler make makes (ing뒤에서는 단수 주어 입니다) it difficult to succeed in mating, which means size of antlers is not the issue of their sexual appeals in which the size of antler does not lead to alluring opposite sex. This counter the reading passage's claim that the pivotal role in antler is mating and with this, deer determine the winner and the winner will get mates. Next, the professor insists that it is wrong to say that marking on the tree is considered as a territory warnings. she says that the secretions with strong scent could be an warning of territory to other male instead. This casts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that rubbing against trees is a marking that show shows (marking은 단수 주어 입니다) the surrounding area is under the deer's influences. Finally, the professor argues that there is vague relationship between the antler and deer's defense mechanism. In winter, deer shed their antlers although there is liable to be attacked by predators. Also, female deer have no antlers but they should protect their offspring from the threat of wolves. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that it is essential for deers to have antlers to defend their own because the antler will be used as weapons to be brandished.
점수: 26 일단 알아야할 것은 deer는 셀 수 없는 명사 입니다. 지금 이 에세이는 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 구체적으로 자신의 주장을 잘 보여주고 있습니다. 구체적 설명을 통하여서 각 페시지의 견해가 무엇인지를 잘 파악할 수 있었습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |