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There is no universal agreement on the thesis statement, I think that the ability to cooperate with others is more important today than in the past. In this essay, I will provide reasons to support my opinion below. First of all, the ability to cooperate with others is more important to be successful nowadays. In the past, People thought that to be a doctor, lawyer, judge is the way to be successful in the society and it was available just by studying hard by themselves. However, nowadays make successful business can make lots of money and people think it is more successful in the capitalized world. And it is really important to cooperate with others to do business to be more competitive. In addition, the world is more connected as transportation and communication devices developed and many countries affect each other so people have to solve many problems together. For example, global warming is threatening human being. Thus, summits of each country had global conferences to find a way to protect the earth. It is not available by just one person, one country but the whole world have to work together to solve environmental problem. In summary, the world is changing fast in various aspects. The way to be successful is changed and the ability to co-work is more important than before to be successful. Also, the world is more connected and what people do influence each other more often. For these reason, Cooperating ability is more important today than it was in the past. |