■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :
Do you agree or disagree with the following
statement?
It is more important for students to study
history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.
Use specific reasons and examples to
support your opinion. |
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▶ Your Answer :
It is arguable that we have to be studying history and literature. There are many reasons that exist for example
memories of ancient and emotional reason. However, I suggest science and
mathematics are more important in this century for following subsequent reasons.
First, history
and literature are not precise. Those subjects purpose different views (단복수) to many people
who see those. On the contrary, science and mathematics show more precisely
through number and formula. History and literature have been written by people.
They can not know, remain and write about all face of scene. Therefore, many faces of scene are lost and some part of filled with assumption. For example, in World War II, Unites
States threw (시제) atomic bomb to japan twice. Radiation is deadly for human and all
people recognize this. But throwing atomic bomb is not criticized. There are
two perspectives with that scene. One is “US should have to use atomic bomb.” Another is “US
just wants to use atomic bomb.”
Second, there is
nothing to improve. Science and mathematics are progressively improved by
people’s curiosity from past. But history and literature purpose new sight to
us and there is no improvement. Varying genre and discover covered fact. But except
that, there is nothing. Novel is novel even though has many genres or includes new contents. Covered fact
can not be discovered without scientific technology and researching tools. For previous example, for World War II, people believe US should have used atomic bomb until Soviet Union tried to make atomic bomb at that time. After
people know that some of people guessed japan considered prey from those
nations’ competition. But that is all. There is no evident and no improvement why US has (주어 동사 불일치) to use atomic bomb.
In
conclusion, history and literature are is so anonymous. They referred some face of
scene and emotional reasons but that is not agreed by all people. However, all
people understand there is no doubt in science and mathematics until new
phenomena is (수동태) discovered. Of course history and literature are also needed. But I
suggest science and mathematics are more important than those.
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1. 두 가지 reasons 모두 매우 합리적입니다.
하지만 문장력이 그 좋은 이유를 받쳐주지 못하고 있습니다.
불필요한 사족이 많고, 문법이 매우 불안정합니다.
문장 단위의 영작을 먼저 연습하시면 좋을 거 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*