■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
According to the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that coal is useful and easy to mine, which can be of great advantages for our society. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's points First of all, the professor contends that the technique to dig the tunnel for getting the coal is complicated. Since coal in the surface of the Earth is limited, we should make deeper tunnels to mine coals. This requires us to develop cutting-edge technologies, but it costs (주어 동사 불일치) a lot of money. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that coal mining does not need high technique. and with strip mining, burrowing tunnel becomes easy and save the time and money. Next, the professor insists that since coals are heavy and bulky, it is hard to work for worker to transport them. Moreover, there are many stages to carry the material to the place of final destination. This process needs a lot of trucks and ships, and this is complex and costs a lot. This counters the reading passage's assertion that there is no dangerous and intricate process in transporting the coal since the coal is just shipped with their own forms. Finally, the professor argues that the employee working for mining companies will be on the wane. Because the state of the art machineries can replace the workers, the job market on coal industry will decrease and there is nothing to work to our society's advantage. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that the coal industry creates (주어 동사 일치) lots of job offers (단복수) and It has the (관사) potential growth with expanding energy requirements.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. 사소한 문법 오류가 많은 편입니다.
proof-reading을 꼼꼼히 해서 실수를 줄여주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*