▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample
support for the author’s claim that discovered evidences represent that the
Amazon has not backed up a giant and advanced civilization. However, the
professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s
point.
To
begin with, the lecturer argues that archaeologists used a satellite machine to
find if there was a large village in the Amazon. What they found was that a
large number of towns and roads. This opposes that the reading passage’s claim
that dense vegetation triggered lack of communication. So they were not able to
build a large society. so that they cannot build a large society
On
top of that, the professor claims that it does not account for the sophisticated
pottery from the region. For example, from Maroho
Island, people found remains which contain elaborated patterns and it must have
done with developed civilization. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s
claim that the indigenous form of their simple tool makings represent that the society
in the Amazon was not an advanced group.
Finally,
the lecturer asserts that it is surprising that European Expedition failed to
find the society. The reason is that, the area that people The area people (the reason is는 적절한 표현이 아닙니다) inhabited was too
big to search like Cambodia. This refutes the reading passage’s claim that what
the expedition found was that the small size of groups in the Amazon.
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