▶ Your Answer :
Some
people say that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
because tour guide has abundant information about the travel area. However, I
disagree with the statement for two reasons. The reasons are that travelers
will have less time to enjoy with friends and family during travel and
travelers’ choice of visiting places they prefer will be limited.
At
first, travelers will have shorter time to enjoy with people who they came to
the travel with. One of the most important matters of going on to a travel is
that people want relaxation and stress relieving time. Talking to friends,
family, and lovers during vacation is perfect time for travelers to relax their
mind and relieve stress because people in modern days are very busy working.
However, if a tour guide is presence, guide will limit tourists’ time on
looking around the places. Also, guide will rush tourists to other places. Therefore,
tourists will be in rush all the time and have less time to relax and enjoy the
atmosphere with loving ones. According to the study conducted by Seoul National
University, they had a survey on why people go to vacation. 80 percent of
people said that they want to relax their mind and body for few days. 70
percent of the 80 percent of people said that they like to travel because they
can have enough time to enjoy with loving ones. As the survey proves, most of
travelers go for vacation in order to relax and share thoughts with their
friends, family, and lovers. However, if a tour guide rushes tourists to visit
as many places as possible, their free time and relaxation time will be interrupted.
Secondly,
each traveler has different preference of which place to go so when a tour
guide lead travelers to go to certain places in their system, travelers will be
unsatisfied at the end. In a group, some people are interested in politics and
some people are interested in seeing great views. However, a tour guide won’t
be able to meet everyone’s satisfaction because the guide will only lead the
people to places in their system only. In my personal experience of visiting
New York when I was 24 years old, I only had 5 days of visiting. Since I really
like sports, I wanted to visit New York’s baseball and basketball games.
However, I was trapped in the tour guide’s schedule so that I wasn’t able to do
what I actually wanted to do such as going to baseball game and purchasing a
jersey of a famous player and get signature. In the end, I was disappointed
greatly. Like my personal experience, travelers should go for vacation without
a tour guide in order to enjoy the vacation without any regrets.
Because
of the reasons I mentioned earlier, I strongly believe that going on a vacation
without a tour guide is much better than going for a travel in a group led by a
tour guide.
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