■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than the ability to give knowledge.
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that there should be more responsibility on the part of teachers to give knowledge than get along with students. However, I strongly believe that the statement above is untrue because friendly teachers motivates students to study more and interaction with teachers enhance students’ social skills. To begin with, if teachers are familiar with students, they can encourage students to study hard. Although, students can be inspired various factors around them, teacher’s attention is the most important part of being get motivated. For example, when I was seventeen years old in high school students, one of my friend was a serious problem child student. Even though he did not have any interest in studying, a warm-hearted math teacher kept concerning him to concentrate in school work and became a good friend to counsel his personal trouble so that he could get accepted to one of Ivy league university. Without her ability to relate well with students, my friend could not have got over his problem. On top of that, By interacting with students, teachers can enhance students’ social skills. In the rapidly changing business environment, a businessman should have not only broad knowledge about industry, but also ability to interact well with others to work with. According to a recent research by Cho-sun daily news, Korean top 30 major companies are looking for applicants with outgoing personality. In order to recruit such employee, companies are adopting group interview with 3~5 applicants at the same time to see their interpersonal ability to work. This illustrates the importance of supporting that a teacher’s ability to relate well with students is important. To sum up, we should consider the fact that does who have ability to maintain intimate relationship with students are good teachers than have professional skills in teaching, since they can stimulate students to study hard and promote students’ sociality. I can say with great confidence that my opinion will turn a right one. | |
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막상 써보니 시제랑 관사 부분이 참 헷갈리는데 문법적인 부분을 어떻게 단시간내에 극복해야할지 고민이네요.
첨삭과 조언 부탁드리겠습니다. 감사합니다^^