▶ Your Answer :
An intriguing topic of discussion at hand is why the music
is important to us. The answer to this question can vary greatly depending on
the individual perspectives. Thus, the jury may still be out, but as far as I’m
concerned, its advantage is to help us to gain energy to achieve our goals
successfully . In this essay, I will present two reasons supporting my
standpoint as follows.
First, the sound of the music helps us to make better
results in our study or projects.. Sometimes, people’ emotion can be varied
from sadness to happiness depending on the sound they hear. It especially helpful
for our study or work when we listen to bright or exciting music because it
makes our feeling better and we can have new energy to do that. For example,
when I took a leader of a project in economy class last year, I invited all
members of my group to my home every weekends to do work together. At first, we
felt difficult to suggest any opinions or communicate with others because the atmosphere
among us was too dark to do something. Thus, in order to reduce tension among
us I prepared bright dance music for them whenever we have meeting, which was
very useful that we became closed. It is sure that all members felt easy to do
work after that.
In addition, the lyrics of the music give us the strength
to overcome the hardship we meet. In our life. Since many singers write the
lyrics of their songs based on their real experiences, we are easily able to sympathize
it. If they talk that we can do that and the difficulty is nothing in their
songs, the listeners will apply it to their life and find the hope from them.
The runner, one of old and famous Korean song was the one to give energy to me
whenever I met difficulties in my life. The most impressive word of it was that
we can take a rest for a long time after finishing works. It looks very simple word
but it was big comfort to me because I could expect the end of my study by
listening to it. By memorizing that word every moment, I was likely to finish
my study well without giving up it.
In conclusion, I strongly argue for my standpoint on
account of the two reasons mentioned above. Once again, although the verdict
may still be out, I personally believe that two of my rationales above are
sufficiently convincing enough to represent the viewpoint of a majority of
people who are in favor of my claim. |