▶ Your Answer : When watching interviews by some successful
people, they usually say luck has helped them to success. However, this line is
only for people who are being humble. Behind their success, there are efforts
that led to their success. Thus, it is wrong to solely wait for the luck to
come since luck has nothing to do with success. To begin with, hard work is fundamental in
everything. In order for luck to work, there should be some preparation to be embedded.
Conversely, although a person encounters good opportunity, that person will not
be able to use it wisely if he has not worked hard before. Thus, everything is
based on one's efforts. For example, my brother Max wanted to become an actor
since he was in high school. In order to achieve his dream, he practiced acting
every day in his school drama club. Not only practicing acting but he also
exercised every day to stay in fit so that he would look nice on the screen.
One day, Max's homeroom teacher suggested Max a role in one movie that was
directed by his teacher's brother. The director was looking for a young man for
the role and asked the teacher to recommend one of the students in the class.
Luckily, the teacher chose Max and he got to debut on the screen. Some people
might think that Max was very lucky that his homeroom teacher was a brother of
a movie director. However, without Max's painstaking efforts, he would not have
been able to be realized by his teacher. Thus, Max could use his opportunity
well because of his hard work.
On top of this, hard works never betray. If
one works really hard in one field, he will be able to use that ability in some
way when he gets to work in that field. On the other hand, if one gets to the
high position with only luck but not effort, he will not be able to sustain
that position if he does not have the right ability for that place. For instance,
my neighbor Mark worked for one of the top ten trade companies in the world.
Everyone including him knew that he was recruited by that company for luck
because he did not study foreign language hard. However the problem was that
after he was recruited, he could not work efficiently since he lacked the
ability to speak in variety of languages. Realizing his lack of ability, his
boss fired him since he could not successfully do the work. This indicates that
although one might encounter luck that seems to lead success, if there is no
hard work, the luck will just flow away. Thus, luck is no use if there is no
effort.
Due to the fact that efforts are the base
of every success and that hard work never betray, luck is not a feature that
determine success.
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