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Topic : It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Some people says it is more enjoyable to have a job where they work five days a week for shorter hours. I, however, differ them. I think it is more enjoyable to have a job where I work only three days a week for long hours. It is because it, working three days a week, makes us to concentrate with our job due to working days per week is relatively shorter than the others. Plus, we can enjoy more number of holiday than the others.
To begin with, working three days a week makes people to be occupied on their project. It is because they long for holiday and have shorter days for working than others. They think they have to do the project as amount as others do. There is greatly fitting example in this case. When I had a full-time job in the shipbuilding company, working four days a week, my friend was a part-time worker in the cafe. My wage was of cousely higher than him, and I had holiday more than him. One day, he talked me he feel envy to me. After that, I think that to work intensive is more efficient.
On top of that, there is huge advantage of holidays, four days a week. In other words, it can be used for more various ways than others, two days a week. More holyday means more free time. For example, two holydays a week is hard to travel long distance or abroad. But it can realize when it is four days a week. Therefore, people can enjoy their week even they have to work hard three days.
To sum up, working three days a week can afford us to concentrate on the job and more free time for people's life. For these reasons, I agree with the statement that it is more enjoyable to have a job where I work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where I work five days a week for shorter hours.