▶ Your Answer :There is an
argument over whether people should try out several different occupations
before committing to a long-term job. Some people believe that people can
increase their creativeness by trying out some different occupations. My view,
however, is that people should get a special long-term job without taking some
jobs. This is largely because modern society requires a specialist. Moreover,
people are so busy that they cannot try out diverse occupations.
To
begin with, our society requires an expert because special skills are important
in modern society. Also, the thing which masters one job is hard. To become a
specialist, people should try so much. For example, my sister wanted to be a
plastic-surgery doctor. Therefore, she tried and tried again for 3 years for Korean
SAT. When succeeding for Korean SAT, she entered at a medical school. However,
she had to study continuously for 10 years. Finally, she became a doctor and
she has been satisfied with becoming a doctor. Only study period to be a doctor
is 13 years, therefore she could not strive other things. To the example shows,
having special skills is difficult in many ways. This is why people should
commit to a long-term job. Thus, people should try to be a specialist not a
multiplayer.
Additionally,
people are so busy that they do not have a time to get several jobs. To experience
several different occupations, people often get multiple jobs simultaneously but
it is not efficient. If people get more than two jobs, they cannot focus on one
thing. For instance, Tom, my best friend, tried to do internship, an
extra-curricular program, and a weekend part time job last year. He could not
concentrate anything, so he failed everything, which means he regretted for over-planning.
If he had taken only internship, he would have been admitted by his
supervisors. Therefore, people should concentrate on one thing on the grounds
that they do not have a time to get more than two jobs.
To summarize, I
disagree with the opinion that people should try out some different occupations.
This is because our society wants an expert. Furthermore, people do not have a
time because they are so busy. |