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People
disagree over the statement that parents are
the best teacher. Some people believe that children could be taught a lot of Knowledge
and wisdom by their parents while others argue they won't teach their children
well. I Strongly believe that no one can be the best teacher except for parents
because of their affluent experiences and knowing all about their children.
First of
all, Parents have plenty experiences that can give guides to their children.
Parents experienced the same periods as their children have, which include in
the childhood, the adolescence and the adulthood. Also, they have experiences
that they made important choices in their life. In my sister's case, she was
worried about making the decision to have a baby because of her career. My
mother has same experience when she got married. My mother gave her to the
answer that she can do both by managing her schedule and asking a favor to her
husband. Eventually, she had a son and kept continuing her job. That is why
parents will be the best mentor to tell an advice about their children's
concerns that they had before. Parents could teach their children by using
their experiences.
Since
Parent know all information on their children owing to raising them, their
teaching can be the best adapted to their children. While school teachers are
not able to know their students until they meet in the class, parents spend
their whole time with their children since they were born. So they cannot help
but know their children's all characters. For example, when I was student,
I had to select my major and a university. I couldn't talk about this worry
with my friends who were in the same situation. My teacher just gave the guide
according to my grade. But my father told me that I was interested in the
automobile, so I had better choose to the mechanics. And then I choose my
major,'mechanics', after all, I was satisfied with it. This advice was based
upon my hobby that my teacher didn't know but my mother did. This reason helps parents to give the advice tailored their
children's features and talents.
Considering
parents' experiences that are similar to children's anxieties and their
information with regard with their children, I hold the opinion that
parents will be the best teacher of their children. Children should ponder
their parents' advice before they make a choice at the most important moment.
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