These days, many people want a better accessibility to the Internet. Having improved accessibility to the internet might help us to enjoy our worldly delight. However, I strongly believe that improving the transportation system is more urgent than having an easily accessible internet surface, due to the fact that commuting has become encumbering work. Also, having an easily accessible internet might cause additional problems resulting from anonymity of internet.
To start with, if a the accessibility of the internet gets improved, it might worsen the problems of anonymity of young internet users. There has been issues have been issues / has been an issue regarding internet morality among users since the beginning of the internet use. Because people are more prone to show their true nature when they are covered or protected from other people's judges; (use semicolon instead of comma to separate two complete sentences) online environent environment, which provides anonymity to their users, is a perfect place for some people to act immorally. Therefore, if the interface or accessibility of the internet gets improved, there is a chance (sounds better if you add 'more' = there are more chances to invite …) to invite young users whose morality is not yet fully matured. Since normal people have no trouble to access to the internet, (no comma is needed because main and subordinating clause is straight forward) because its accessibility is already good enough, I believe there is simply no need to improve accessibility to the internet. (I think is better to finish the sentence with a point after ‘enough.’ then start with another sentence starting with ‘I believe’ making this sentence as conclusion sentence for this paragraph)
Secondly, people need more comfortable transportation system more than easily accessible internet. Commuting to one's work places or schools has become a major problem, due to the increasing population. These bustling crowd in rush hour are becoming pain to each other. People get nothing but stress when they commute. In addition, people waste a large amount of their time in their lives, waiting for the subways or the buses to come. However, if transportation system gets improved, these encumbering troubles will be alleviated. People will be able to commute on more uncrowded transportations, feeling more comfortable.
All in all, some people might want a more easily accessible internet. However, I believe that improving the transportation system is more urgent, due to the examples shown in above. Better commuting environment can reduce stress of people's lives.
All the sentences were clear to understand and strict to the point. Better use of comma(,) and semicolon(;) will improve your sentence structure.