▶ Your Answer :
Some argue that staying in one city or town will bring
stability and security, resulting in happier life. However, in my point of
view, moving to various cities and experience different place is much better
choice. That is, moving different places offer opportunity to meet new people
and to get various cultural experiences.
First and foremost, living in different cities provides
chances to meet new people which can help to broaden social networks. If one is
staying at one place for a long time, there are fewer chances to meet new
people because social events and appointments tend to be repeated. Therefore,
it is difficult to build new relationships. On the contrary, if moved to
another city or country, it is much easier to get acquainted with new people
there and broaden the social network. According to the research done by Department
of Business in Seoul National University, people who have social network have
70% higher chance to be successful than who have limited relationships.
Therefore, it is much better to have the chances to meet new people by moving
to other cities.
Another equally important reason is that living in a
different city or country teaches to learn new culture. As the transportation
system developed, many people are now able to live in far away cities or even
countries. Therefore, they get to experience and learn new customs from the new
circumstances. Such various life experience lead to happier state of mind and
satisfaction. To illustrate, my grandmother was nurse who lived various
countries when she was young. She lived in Germany, Indonesia, and China for a
long time. Moreover, she travelled other countries near them. Such various
experience and cultural exposure made her life much more satisfactory. She
sometimes tells her stories about the exciting adventure she went through
living in different place. In this sense, having a chance to live in a
different set of environment is something to be appreciated.
In conclusion, moving from one place to another not
only provides an opportunity for people to broaden their social network, but
also higher life satisfaction through various experiences. In this regard, it
is clear that moving from one place to another is better than living in one
city for a long time.
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