*진하게 표시한 부분은 제가 파악한 문단의 주요 내용이니 참고하세요^^
Both the reading passage and the lecture deal deals with the construction method of the Egyptian pyramids. Whereas the readig passage contends that the blocks that constitute the pyramids are is made of concrete, a mixture of limestone and clay, the lecturer contradicts this theory by pointing out flaws of it this theory.
To start with, the reading passage suggests that the ancient Egyptian were skilled in manufacturing and molding concrete, inferring from the Egyptian vases. According to the reading passage, these vases' interior was were carved very elaborately, supporting the reading passage's theory. However, the lecturer first casts doubt on the very existence of the vases. In addition, the lecturer points out that even if the vases do exist, it is made by putting two halves together with adhesive, not by molding them. vase의 존재에 대한 doubt와 만드는 방식에 대한 detail들이 lecturer의 어떤 주장을 뒷받침하기 위한 것인지를 밝혀주세요. 문단의 중심 포인트는 vase자체가 아니라 molding 기술이 있기 때문에 피라미드를 concrete로 만들 수 있었다/아니다에 대한 내용이지요.
Secondly, the reading passage contends that the blocks that consist the pyramid have a low density and contains air bubbles, which indicates that the blocks were made of concrete. However, the lecturer counters this theory by pointing out that the air bubbles and low density are is the result of periodic restoration process. During the restoration process, concrete must be pasted on the blocks over time, in order to withstand weathering process. 일목요연한 설명이나 detail부분들이 잘 정리되어 있습니다.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that there is unexpected amount of moisture within the blocks and the inside of the pyramids, suggesting that humid is originated from molded concrete, which had not fully dried when it was put in place. However, the lecturer refutes this opinion by pointing out that this humidity within the blocks and interior of the pyramid are is the result of human action. To be specific, when the tourists exale when they are in the pyramids, the humidity simultaneously increases, due to the tourists' respiratory activity.
전반적으로 내용 정리에 필요한 부분을 잘 노트테이킹해주신 것 같습니다. 각 문단의 point에 초점을 두고 대립되는 내용들도 잘 정리된 편입니다. 제가 정확하게 지문의 내용을 모르는 상태에서 요약 형식이나 detail들만을 가지고 평가한 부분이므로 꼭! 문제지의 답안과 직접 확인하셔서 노트테이킹에서 빠진 부분이나 잘못 이해된 부분은 없는지 내용 체크해주시기 바랍니다. 수고 많으셨습니다^^화이팅!