*진하게 표시한 부분은 제가 파악한 문단의 주요 내용이니 참고하세요^^
Both the lecture and the reading passage deal deals with the topic of underwater mining. Whereas the reading passage asserts that it is very promising to mine underwater, the lecturer counters this argument by pointing out flaws of the reading passage's assumption.
To start with, the reading passage contends that there are a large mount of extractable metal deposit in the seabed. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the reading passage's assumption by saying that because, underwater mining is not only underwater mining is unprecedented enterprise and , but also metal deposits in the seabed contain a large amount of impurities. In addition, the number of people who have lack the adequate technology to collect and transport extracted metals to land is not enough. 많은 양의 자원이 묻혀있다고 해도 정제할 필요가 있고 인력이 부족하기 때문에 소용없다는 내용은 적절합니다.
Secondly, the reading passage asserts that mining underwater can be done without harming the surrounding environment. However, the lecturer suggests that it is inevitable to scatter all the dust particles that were produced during the excavation. Due to the ocean currents, this dust clouds will spread to the adjoining environment, and harm the ecosystem. 환경파괴와 관련해 대립되는 두 지문의 내용이 잘 정리된 문단입니다.
Lastly, whereas the reading passage argues that there will be no wreckless mining because it will be conducted under international law, the lecturer points out that most of excavation will be conducted only in individual nation's territories because 쉼표삭제 it is easy to access to the excavation sight and transport materials. 문장이 불필요하게 길면 문법오류가 발생하기 쉽고 전달력이 떨어집니다. 굳이 한 문장으로 제시할 필요가 없는 내용이므로 내용단위에서 끊어주세요. This indicates that international law will not wield its power to companies, countering the reading passage that international law will prevent major companies from exploiting resources.
전반적으로 내용 정리에 필요한 부분을 잘 노트테이킹해주신 것 같습니다. 지문에서 사용한 문장을 그대로 인용하는 느낌이 나지 않도록 단어나 어순에 변형을 주어서 정리하는 것이 점수에 더 도움이 되니 참고하세요^^ 문제지의 답안과 직접 확인하셔서 노트테이킹에서 빠진 부분이나 잘못 이해된 부분은 없는지 다시 한 번 내용 체크해주시기 바랍니다. 수고 많으셨습니다^^화이팅!