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All people try their best to obtain their aim, but most of them fail to get the success even though they work really diligently. Furthermore, some people acquire unintended result though they do not work hard. It is quite unfair for those who study rally hard. Therefore, we should recognize the effort of journey of people. In that way, we could hearten people to try their goal again, and be more helpful in the future. Lastly, realizing only success is malicious way of assessing person's nature.
If we encourage people who fail to obtain their achievements, it would give them a tremendous effect. For instance, he could get the willing to try again and overcome this complicated situation whenever he faces it. In contrast, we did not try to recognize the effort of failed person, it would trigger detrimental consequences. In Korea, most of high school students have gotten innumerable pressures from their studying. They work really hard to go to famous university. However, this reason sometime bring bad situation like committing suicides. The most adequate reason to explain their suicide is their parent. Their parent only seeks the better grade then the student gets and seeks the good result. This greed of student's parent led their children to die. If they just hearten their children to try again. Their child does not need to commit this perilous behavior and successfully achieves their goals.
Most of people get the energy or motivation through people they love or respect. This willing is really tremendous, so it makes people to not relinquish again when they conflict the situation they struggle with. If not, they could be obsessed with success and finally undermine the situation. Therefore, we should realize the effort of one’s. The person with successfully overcome the intricate situation is more likely to success, because they know how to deal with problem they encountered before. In other words, they endure their problem by other’s encouragement.
Evaluating people with their fortune and property is vicious way to assess people. All people have totally different characteristic and way of thinking, so we should carefully judge people. There is some old fairy story that perfectly matches with this idea. Long time ago, there is a very rich old man. He does not know how to socialize with other, because he spends his whole life to make money. After the rich man retires from his work, he decides to make friends. As time goes by, the rich man successfully makes two friends. His first friend uses to avoid pay money, while his second friend is willing to pay the money during playing time. One day, the rich man loses his all money to defrauder. He does not have any place to sleep. Therefore, we go to his first friend’s house, but he refuses the rich man to sleep at his house when he hears the story. The old man gets shocked and he finally realizes that he was wrong. At that moment, the second friend finds the old man is sitting on the street. He brings the old man without asking why and let him to live in his house until he catches the defrauder. Throughout this happening, the old man recognized how to assess the people.
Most people work really hard and some of them succeed in obtaining their goal, while the others fails to achieve their aim. When one of our surrounded people faces this happening, we should hearten them to try again instead of compelling them to try again.
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