■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there is no need for the government to help them. | |
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▶ Your Answer :There is everlasting debate over pros and cons on government intervention. Some people strongly believe that no one can't more effectively solve the problems than individuals suffering from that. And therefore, they insist that government should not intervene the areas of individuals. However I think that government intervention is the essential in modern society by the following two reasons. First of all, most concerns people suffer from is attributed to social problems such as poverty, lack of house, traffic jam and unemployment, So huge are the problems that individuals can't properly settle them, Put it another way, They can be solved not by individuals effort, but by the help of government. individuals can't handle complex tasks. while a timely, proper measures of government overcome various problems through valid government intervention. For famous and historical problem, when the Great Depression stroke world economy, Roosevelt, who was the president of America at that time, realized that t is through government intervention that the recession could be settled. And therefore, the Roosevelt's Administration enforced 'The New Deal' policy. The policy strived to increase employment and decrease unemployment rate through a variety of business such as Timothy-dam-construction. It saved millions people from unemployment and returned America economy to its normal course before the Great Depression. this historical lesson show us the fact that the most serious problems which distress people is usually beyond their ability and the problems can be properly settled through government intervention. Second reason why people can solve their important tasks with the help of government is that it has responsibility for caring for social minorities. They can't settle not only social structure problems, such as unemployment, but also the task only involved in individual. In modern society, possibility of overcoming problems usually depends on how much they earn. Although, in overcoming individual problem , the rich can cost unlimited money, the poor, in extreme case, abandon their medical treat because of poverty. Thus, government should take care of those who are trapped in inability. According to a research conducted by Seoul national university hospital, lack of medical treatment cost push patient to death. it means that ideology of capitalism -a task on your own- drives social minors to situation where they can't handle. Therefore, government rolls up their sleeve and should help them without hesitation, In conclusion, I strongly maintain that with the help of government, people can efficiently overcome obstacles which hamper them from moving forward by following two reasons. First, government can solve such a giant task. Second, they also have a charge of caring for social minorities. | |
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