■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : The emerald ash borer |
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▶ Your Answer :
The reading and the lecture both talk about
emerald ash borer. The reading says that there are three solutions that solve
the problem of the emerald ash borer causes. However, the lecturer argues that
none of the solutions mentioned in the reading are viable.
Firstly, the reading says that the symptoms
can be cured by eliminating affected trees because they are easily discovered
due to their characteristics such as holes on the surface and split of bark. On
the contrary, the speaker states that the solution is not effective. This is
because it takes only one to two years to show symptoms, so after that, they
already spread. Moreover, the solution only works in an urban area since too
many trees in the forest make it difficult to look at all the trees
individually.
Secondly, in the reading, the author argues
that applying a chemical treatment like pesticide prevents the adult and the
larva from proliferating. In contrast, the lecturer points out that using
pesticides is highly problematic. It can lead to groundwater contamination
since the chemicals are (수동태) absorbed in the soil. Also, it will not work if there are
already too many larvae, because (연결어 필요합니다.) the insects would have disrupted the circulatory
system.
Thirdly, the reading goes on to say that
biological way can be efficient. The parasitic wasps can be used to kill the
pest. However, the lecturer contradicts this statement, arguing that the
solution has some limitations. The wasps are not able to endure the cold
weather in North America. In addition, if there are some invasive species, it
could cause the unintended result of killing other native insects. |
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