▶ Your Answer : Some people might say that buying a piece of jewelry is a desirable choice in order to wear the jewelry for a long time. However, in my opinion, I firmly believe that attending a concert has several benefits for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, enjoying a concert people hope to participate in provides them with pleasure. To be specific, in general, in a concert, singers stimulate people’ mind to be happy and excited. For example, four years ago, I was eager to attend Jo concert accommodating more than 10,000 people in the end of the year. I bought a ticket online coincidentally and counted days with looking at a calendar everyday. Finally, I joined the concert with pleasure and while following songs singers sang, I could remind of (전치사) my happy childhood. Through the experience, attendants could arouse nostalgia from their mind inside. (어떤 부분에서 향수를 불러일으키는지 잘 모르겠습니다. 모두에게 해당사항인건가요? 이 문단은 설득력이 상당히 떨어집니다.)
On top of that, the second crucial effect in a concert is to release stress. To explain, in a concert, people yell and shout out songs and singers’ name. Thus, maniacs for singing songs can reduce their stress from their work. For example, there was a survey conducted by Korea University. The purpose of the survey was to figure out the influence of concerts people want to participate in. What it found was astounding. Overwhelming 90% responded that while in a concert, they could focus on the concert without thinking about their work and alleviate their stress significantly. From the result, there is no doubt going to a concert has an affirmative impact on people’ working life.
To sum up, taking the beneficial factors of a concert into consideration, it is worth buying concerts’ tickets. In this regard, I strongly believe that the advantages of purchase of a concert ticket far outweigh (주어 동사 불일치) its counterpart.
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