■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The reading
and the lecture are both about the EAS. While the reading states that the EAS
is so beneficial, the lecturer disagrees with the author's opinion. The
lecturer casts doubt about the three main points made in the passage.
First of all,
according to the reading, the EAS enables rural people to arrive in the city
fast and cheaply. However, the lecturer disputes the idea. He says that the bus
or car takes the same time compared with riding an airplane. So, there is no
reason to go to the airport to go to the city. It is just a waste of time.
Secondly, the
reading states that the suburbs can get an economic benefit. Nevertheless, the
lecturer believes that the rural needs to spend money on making a new job. He
says that if the town has more workplaces, then the town can be developed like
a big city.
Finally, the
reading claims that since the EAC is operated by small aircraft, it helps
people save money. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts the statement.
He says that the small size of aircraft means that they have to be repaired
frequently. Therefore, if we consider maintaining fee, it is not
cost-effective.
In
conclusion, although the reading and the lecturer are both about the EAS, the
lecturer contradicts the three main points made in the reading are effectively
challenged by the lecturer |
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통합형에서 conclusion은 필요하지 않습니다.
빼주셔도 됩니다!
그리고 전체적으로 바디가 상당히 짧고 디테일이 부족합니다.
주어진 evidence를 최대한 활용해서, 분량 증량에 집중해주세요.
문법은 깔끔한 편입니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*