■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
There have been dissenters to the view that
having neighbor who is quiet is important. But, in my opinion, (대소문자 구분) someone who is
quiet is the best for my neighborhood. There are several reasons and examples
as follows.
First
of all, quiet people rarely do not give stress to their neighbor. Typically, they
do not generate noise pollution. Different kinds of noise can be occurred by
people. Of course, the noise made during the day is tolerable. But some people play
the piano or talk loudly at night. There is no guarantee that such people will
not be our neighbors. So unless we live in a soundproof apartment, we have no
choice but to be exposed to noise. Once, I was suffered from guitar sound every
night. I can not study at that time because concentration is difficult when I
am tense and stressful. I also have to think about how to talk to them without
fighting. (someone who is quiet은 말을 별로 안 하는 것이지 악기 등으로 소리를 안 내는 사람이 아닙니다. off-topic일 가능성이 있습니다. 성격만 따져주세요.)
Second, when we meet someone who is silent for neighbor, it is easy to be friends with
them. The reason is that there will be fewer troubles. Research shows us the
biggest cause of the problem between the neighbors is inter-floor noise. If people
do not have bad feeling to someone, they can say hello to each other intimately.
That will be the beginning of conversation. For instance, my mother and a woman
who lives next door often exchange food or have a talk about their job. We did
not receive any stress from next door, and this is the reason that sharing only
good feelings and things is possible. As a result, my family is closer to next
door than upstairs who sometimes makes an extreme noise.
In
this regard, I firmly believe that someone who is quiet is the best to have for
the reasons I mentioned above.
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항상 감사드립니다!
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. conclusion의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. 내용의 포인트는 그 사람의 행동이 아니라 그 사람의 성향입니다.
이유로는 (말을 자꾸 걸면 피곤하기 때문에, 말 없이 공감의 기회가 더 많기 때문에)
등이 있을 수 있겠네요.
악기 부분은 빼주시는 것이 더 나을 거 같습니다!
수고하셨습니다. *^^*