▶ Your Answer :
There is an argument over whether spending
time with family is more important than being at work. I agree that spending
time at work is more important for two reasons. First, earning money is
critical to keep family. Second, workers are happier.
To begin with, making money is much more
important than ever for family members. In general, job security is not
guaranteed without endeavors. Moreover, large of household incomes goes into
after-school private education for children. Prices from necessities are also
keeping increasing. Therefore, people should spend more time at work than home
for money. Let me take one of my friends for an example. He was in college,
although he loved to spend time with his family, he was required to work for
money because his father was sick and lost job. Therefore he found a job at a
car company after his college. Actually, he was barely able to survive layoffs.
The country's economy went through an economic downturn, his company was hit
hard. Then, a substantial number of
workers were laid off. Therefore, he always kept a busy schedule enhancing his competiveness
concerning job security all the time. Therefore, he spends more time at work
than home. For this regards, spending time at work is more important.
Moreover, people who spend more time on
working is happy than others. Although family members are very close to each
member, there is a thing that they could not understand each other. However,
coworkers can help each other because they share work experience together. A
study conducted in Harvard university shows that people who spend many time at
work have more tendency to get useful advices from other workers and happy than
people who spend many time at home. This study also shows that helps from
workers can help to relieve stress because workers can understand their
situation better than family members. For this regards, spending time for
working at the company is more important than spending time at home.
To sum up, I believe that spending time for
work is more important than for family because making money needed time at
workplace and people can happy through their jobs.
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