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A big chunk of
population believes that mobile phone has influenced positively in many ways. While
others think otherwise. Before I render my opinion, I believe it is best to
discuss both sides first in order to arrive to a fool-proof decision.
Naturally, People growing from different surroundings have different
perceptions towards it. In my opinion I would settle upon television has
destroyed communication among friends and family because for me it more intrinsic
worth than otherwise.
The primary reason
that is usually observed is that people who watch television have made
aggressively. According to a survey conducted by MBC, one of the Korean
republic broadcasting stations, 66percent of the surveyed people responded that
television makes people’s relations worse.
In the survey of
more than a thousand people in the Seoul metropolitan area, the respondent said
that watching TV has reduced communication and talking with family. This clearly
indicates that it mentions that watching TV have influenced badly.
One more cause for
my belief is that inappropriate content in television advertisements, such as
sex and violence, makes teenagers reckless and aggressive. Let me take my
experience as an example. When my younger brother watched television, he conducted
violent conduct and like television characters. I was very surprised and then
put off television.
As a result, I
believe that young children and teenagers are likely to be impulsive in their
thoughts and behavior.
Subsequent to
mulling this query, I have finally come to grasp that it is negative for family
or friends to watch television. However everything has two sides in order for
the disadvantages not to prevail we should exercise caution and moderation. It is
clear that there are many underlying causes for this depressing occurrence, and
that the individuals and the nation are negative affected by it. For these
reasons, we should be done to address it. More assuredly, if individuals,
groups, and nation work hand in hand this unfavorable incidence could be
solved. 이정도 쓰면, 점수 어느정도 되는지 알 수 있을까요?... 문장을 길게 쓸 능력이 안되서, 템플릿에 끼워 썼는데, 쉽지가 않네요 좋은하루되세요!
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