■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic : As society progresses, advice
from grandparents to children is not as useful as it was in the past.
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▶ Your Answer :As society develops, people meet what they never experienced before.
We meet new machines and learn how to manipulate it. Many things around us are so
rapidly changing that it is hard to keep pace with it for us. So, there are
many opinions different from me, I think that advice
from grandparents to children is not as useful as it was in the past.
Firstly, the environment between our grandfathers and ours
are so many different in many points. For example, farming was principal in the
era of my grandfather. He lived in rural community where people knew each
other. He repeated his daily life, and anything rarely changed in his life
time. But for me, I live in a city and my country is industrialized society. I
met more than 1000 people that I never knew a day. Less than 10% of people in
my country work in farm. In this circumstance, advice grandfather tells to me
look as less important than before. They lived in different world that we are
going to live in.
Secondly, they did not use newly developed machines like computer and
cell phone. They are necessary in these days. When we do not have it, it is
evident that we cannot live in well and we do not communicate with other
people. But there had not existed when my grandfather lived. As a result, he
cannot tell to me how to use a cell phone and computer. They do not adjust
their knowledge to the knowledge of our era.
Consequently, I believe that advice from grandparents is not useful
as it was before. I think that their information has limitations and it has no
good point in it. So, I absolutely do not doubt that it is not necessary to
learn grandfather’s advice. In other words, it is old. | |
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