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For attracting teenagers, many citizens strive to change their hometown into famous city by erecting theaters or parks or some cities construct bars and sell students alcohols illegally. In my opinion, I think these methods that not only the city develops entertain facilities, but the city provides also various educationally cultures for teenagers contribute to attract students who are exhausted from study or other problems as appealing. I will briefly present two main methods to support my opinion.
First of all, it is able for the method to stimulate to attract students who are same age with me by constructing entertain facilities such as theaters, game rooms or Karaoke expecting for alcohols. As we can see, the bigger cities are, the more students live in. Also, the cities provide amusing entertain facilities that students are able to enjoy easily. To specific, I am dwelling in Daegu city that is located in Republic of Korea and is the small city. This city has little entertain facilities in downtown. After end of exam, students who live in the cities to Seoul that is the biggest, capital city in Korea and has many varieties of entertain facilities to enjoy cultures and get rid of stress from exam by singing songs in Karaoke, watching movies in the theater and buying clothes that students want to wear in there. It means that the various entertain facilities can attract people who same with my age. Thus, I think the various entertain facilities for students contribute to my town to appeal to people who are same my age.
On top of that, for attracting students, my city should invest to educations. The city where has various educations has to be crowed by students who have a desire to learn education and want to be erudite in their major that they want to learn. According to a survey that has proven by Busan National University, parents who have their children tend to emigrate to vast cities that were specialized in education for learning. To be specific, my cousin wanted to be a famous interpreter and he went to the educational city in America to learn english. He said to me that 'Here is crowed by students who want to learn amazing educations like me.' Eventually, he could be good at english and he is going to interpreter step by step. Thus, I strongly assert that the city that was specialized in various educations can attract many people who same with my age.
In conclusion, albeit some people might argue that other subordinate reasons attract people, I think that the entertain facilities and various, deepened educations are able to appeal to people effectively. I want that my city should invest a lot of money to entertain facilities that students can allow easily and good educations for attracting students. |