▶ Your Answer : All people enjoy their lives. Some people say that young people have more enjoyable lives than the elderly but others say not. However, I disagree with this statement because older people have more time and money and they know how to enjoy life through experience.
First of all, the elderly have more time and money. Most of them retired their job and have money that they gathered when they were young. These enough time and money offer wider range of options to improve quality of life. For example, my grandmother started travel after retirement. She go to many countries in Europe including France, England, Italy and Germany. Through this trip she feels more satisfied with her life.
Second of all, older people know how to enjoy their life through experience. They have less stress and know how to deal with it. For instance, according to studies, older people are less subject to depression than young people. This is because they get a know-hows in their life and they use these know-hows for relived stress.
In conclusion, I think that the elderly can enjoyable their lives enough than young people. This is because they have more freely from money and time. Also, they know how to enjoy life through experience.
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