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Some people think that people have not to get information from various news sources in order to gain well-informed. However, in my opinion, in terms of winning great-informed, the advantages of searching informations in many ways such as different news sources far outweigh of obtaining certain subjects by only a small sites for two reasons: to have practical assistance and to get a job easily. To begin with, having a lot of informations from diverse news materials allows ordinary people who prepare an entrance test for company to get a job more easily than before, which is a key to get well-informed. This is because knowing many informations from different ways of reading materials is possible to help these people to search a better company which is more reasonable and fittable into on their own. Moreover, since we are living in Information age, so it is more important for those people to get a great job more easily. According to a study conducted by Seoul National University of Korea in 2010, those who can have a lot of information from news sources currently have an enormous competitive advantage over those who cannot because developing and industrialized countries are increasingly moving toward economies based on the manipulation of information. Also, the studies pointed out that the number of employment opportunities available to non-having people will contribute to decline precipitously as a result of this trend. Also, this actin will give the opportunities to make more hired-people. Topic은 미취업자에게 직업을 빨리 구할 수 있게 해준다> 많은 정보를 아는 것은 좋은 직정을 얻게 해줌> 정보화시대를 살고 있어서 이런 것은 더 쉽게 직장을 얻게 해줌> Ex. 정보를 아는 사람이 더 고용기회가 큼 In other words, taking useful informations from different news materials can help people who have already get a job to have practical assistance, which contributes to get well-informed. This is due to the fact that having variety information enables working people how to efficiently acclimate their office even easier than ever because working people can gain particular working skills from lots of news sources. Not only that but, most of the employees might be able to know these informations from their senior employees who has numerous informations about working resources in their works because it is certain that they are almost similar to news sources in their own fields. Actually, they might be have more information than superficial of news in that they have tremendous experience For example, I learned much more from my seniors when I first started working at a motor company. On the other hand, the senior employees in my department taught me many important work skills, such as how to create effective presentations and how to safely handle the machinery in the lab. They helped me greatly and thanks to them, I was assimilate easily to the workplace. 2.Topic은 취업자에게도 실질적인 도움을 줌>다양한 출처로부터 얻은 정보는 회사에서 적응을 빠르게 해주고, 일에 관련한 다양한 정보도 얻음> 회사선배로부터도 도움을 받을 수 있는데 그들은 다양한 일정보 그 자체임, 나을수도 있음(많은 경험이 있어서)> EX. 정보가 많은 선배에게 도움받음 To sum up, all of the people who are unemployed and employed benefits more from getting many information from variety news sources. This is attributed to the fact that it is probable to give others practical help as well as skills for the future career. In this regard, I strongly agree with the statement that people should get information from different news sources in order to get well-informed for the reasons I mentioned above. |