As the world is rapidly changing, there is a controversy over whether lending money to friends would be beneficial for the friendship. In the past, most people mistakenly regarded financial loans to friends as the valuable action by saying those who help their friends in need is true friends. However I strongly believe that it would be more harmful to their relationship to borrow money from friends for their relationship. Since friends easily tend to forget the money they borrowed and the person who lends money do not easily ask his friends to pay back the money (문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. Since ~ pay back the money가 한문장의 첫 부분 입니다. 그 뒤의 문장을 완성시켜 주셔야 해요. Their relationship may be damaged 라는 식의 뒷문장을 써 주시면 됩니다.)
First of all, the closer relationship is, the easier people forget the fact that they should pay money back. This is because people feel so comfortable with their friends that they have less responsibility for owing money and giving it back to their friends as soon as possible. According to a recent study, clearly reveals that people have lower probability of paying back borrowed money when they borrowed it from their family and friends than when they borrowed it from the third party. The main reason of this is that people think that friends would understand even if they cannot rapidly return the money back and so, they do not care much about paying back. Therefore, people tend to have lack leck of responsibility for the money that friends have lent lended to them.
Second, the deeper the relationship is, the more difficult people ask their friends require them to give their money back. This is because they are afraid of hurting their friendship and they do not want to look like stringent ones. They do not want their friends to regard themselves as the ones who value the money more than friends. For instance, I lended lent some amount of money to my close friend when she asked me. At that time I did not say to tell her until when she should pay back since I believed she would pay my money back as soon as possible. Unlike my expectation I expected, it seemed that she was not thinking had not thought of returning my money and did not for a whole month. Every time I saw her, I would really wanted like to ask her to pay my money back money but I hesitated to since becuase it would damage to our friendship and she would think me as the one who thinks that money means more to me than friendship. However I could not put up with it and when I reminded her of the debt, it turned out that she completely forgot. After all I received my money back but after that time I could not trust her as much as I did before.
In conclusion, I strongly argue that it would not be a good idea to lend money to your friends if you would like to keep the friendship closely for a long time. Since friends who borrowed money from you feel less guilty and obligation for paying back. (완전한 문장도 아니고 의미도 이상합니다. 수정을 좀 해주시는 게 좋을 것 같아요. 예를 들면 Because friends who borrowed money from you would feel less guilt and obligation to pay borrowed money back 을 이 전 문장에 이어서 써 주시는 것도 하나의 방법인 것 같아요.) In addition, it is hard for you to ask them to return it fast. On the whole it would be the best policy not to loan finance financially between friends.
Money 스펠링 계속 실수하십니다. 실전 토플에서는 최대한 스펠링 실수를 줄이셔야 합니다. 타자의 정확도를 올려주세요. 그리고 lend의 과거는 lended가 아닙니다. 동사의 과거형을 정확하게 숙지하시고 사용하시는 게 좋을 것 같아요. 또한, 동사의 쓰임에 주의를 기울여 주시길 바래요. 동사뒤에 전치사가 바로 올 수 없는 동사들도 있어요. 그런 쓰임을 잘 확인 해 주시는 게 좋을 것 같아요.