■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should spend as much money on sports as they do on libraries. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that universities should spend more on libraries
than on sports. They might think sport activities are wasting time and only
studying and researching are important. However, I definitely believe that
universities should treat both libraries and sports equally. This is because it
can help students healthy and can be a tool to be socialized.
First of all, physical activities make students to be healthy and it
affects their study. Now days, as the competitions to get high scores are
getting higher, students spend most of their time sitting on the desk and
studying. They do not have enough time to relax their mental and body. However,
if universities provide students proper and well equipped facilities, students
can spare their time to take care of themselves. For example, when my brother
was student, he gained lots of fats and he was tired of being studying in
school. One day, he decided to take part in the basketball team in school, and
he could lose his weigh. Not only that, it led him to get higher grade in his
study since he could release his stress by playing basketball games. If there
was no such s program in university, my brother could not have a chance to participate
in.
For the more, participating in sports such as basketball, baseball
or other activities gives an opportunity to learn how to interact with people. Because
those activities require students to cooperate, they can learn how to
understand and help each other. Moreover, by being a member of the team,
student can expand their social relationship since they can make a new friend.
For me, when I was in university student, I did not have any friends since I
came from other city. However, by registering the tennis club, I could make
many friends and I also could learn a strong sense of cooperation.
To conclude, physical activities have a lot of good aspects in that
it can help students to be healthy and encourage them to learn social relationship.
For these reasons, I strongly believe that universities should consider of sports
as the same level as libraries. | |
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