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Opinions might be divided over young people enjoy their lives than elderly people. People from different walks of life may take different stances on this issue. Personally, I disagree with the given statement, and there are two reasons that could validate my position.
To begin with, older people have more time and money to enjoy their lives. Older people usually retired from their jobs, so they have a lot of free time than young people who are busy with studying and working. Also, they worked for a long time, so they made lots of money.
Enough time and money that young people usually do not have offers wider range of options to imprive quality of life. For example, my grandmother worked so hard when she was young that she has enough fortune to travel around. Also, she quit her job so she has enough time too. She goes many places around the country and around the world with her family members whenever she has opportunity. So she feels happy and satisfied with her life. If there is enough not time and money like young people, it is not easy to travel around and enjoy their life.
On top of that, older people know how to enjoy life through abundant experiences. Older people went through various events, from marriage to retirement. From these many events, older people underwent different emotions such as happiness, sadness, angriness and depression. So they know how to express their feelings and how to deal with problems about relationships. Also, many studies show that older people have less stress than young people and they know the way to recover from their depression. Kind of these abilities make their lives more exciting, interesting and valuable. For instance, my grandmother who is mentioned above has the capacity to solve many problems, ranging from conflict with others to her physical and mental disorders. So she can live her life without any big problems. This leads to her better quality of life. On contrast, my younger brother has many problems dealing with his emotions, relationship with his friend and his depression because he does not have various experiences like his grandmother.
To sum up, older people’s enough time and their abilities to deal with many problems lead to better life. In this regard, I firmly believe that older people have the freedom and opportunity to enjoy their lives more that people who are younger.
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