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A good society is composed of a good house, and a good house is composed of a good room. This phrase shows that a competent person comes from a good house, which was originated from a good room. As for me, the good room is the living room. My living room is in the middle of the house, which is full of different plants, a sofa shaped ㄱ, two computers, a TV, and a big table in the middle. There are two reasons why I especially favor the living room.
First of all, family members can communicate with each other and solve misunderstandings that have existed for a long time. My living room has a sofa shaped like the Korean alphabet, ㄱ, which helps my family to look at each other face-to-face and talk about their day or what they want from each other. For example, during the living room conversation, I told my mom about her habits that I want her to change, such as scolding without listening to my opinion, or always expecting high scores from me.
Furthermore, a living room has the efficacy of supervision. Because the living room is in the middle of the house, which is opened to every family member, every member can see what others are doing while passing by. For example, I was caught by my mom when I was secretly watching a Korean Drama. I thought that she was in her room doing her work and started watching the drama, but when she came out to get her coffee from the kitchen, she saw me and scolded me. By this experience, I learned a lesson; You can do what you want to only when you finish your work. If I watched this drama in my room, I would have watched it every time I turn on the computer.
Every night, our living room is full of laughter and conversations. As for me, a living room is a family room and a monitoring room. It helps me improve relationships between other family members, and sometimes fix my unfavorable habits. In other words, a living room is an aid for busy modern day people.
22분 정도 걸렸네요~~ㅋㅋ 예쁘게 첨삭해주세요^^ (이제 중2 됩니당) 아... 글구! my family members인데 we를 써야 되는 지 they를 써야 하는 지, 글구 my living room 해야하는 지 our living room해야 하는지... 이런 거 좀 애매한 거 같아요~~ㅠㅠ |